"When you edit a discussion on mobile" -> does it mean only the mobile view? Mobile can also mean a mobile device. I think it could be changed to "When you edit a discussion on mobile version" or "mobile view"?
"There will be a new user group for this" -> How about "This is going to be replaced by a new user group"? Because now it doesn't say anything about what will change, it just says that there will be a new user group that can do the same as admins now. Stryn (talk) 18:52, 6 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]