Movement Charter/Community Consultations/2022/Bali Wikimedians Community by Arcuscloud

General Information[edit]

Preamble chapter has explained very well intention and scope. However, there is a correction about sentences, such as "including not limited to" the word "including" should be removed.
The sentence " The infrastructure also supports content contributors, readers, and all others who are part of the global Wikimedia movement by promoting and advancing a safe and productive environment in which knowledge can be shared and consumed, where it is not feasible for a local project to do so itself." needs to be simplified.
There is misspeeling from first paragraph in Indonesian translation, "antar-entitas" should be written "antarentitas".

"Free knowledge and Open sources" should adjust with code of ethics especially for writing.
There is misspeling from "Equity" Values & Principles in Indonesian translation, "prgamatis" should be written "pragmatis" and the sentences "Kami memberdayakan dan mendukung komunitas melalui cara-cara desentralisasi dan otonomi dan prgamatis" should be written "Kami memberdayakan dan mendukung komunitas melalui cara-cara desentralisasi, otonomi dan pragmatis".

There is no more explanation about Hub and Global Council.
In Indonesian translation, Hub and Global Council are not linked to other meta pages. It is not the same with English version.