Talk:Wikimedia Blog/Drafts/Wikipedia Readers Survey Pakistan

Few suggestions:

• Fourth paragaph is talking about gender gap so how about replacing "Pakistan" with "Global". For instance: Globally, Wikipedia users are predominantly male so as expected……… We can mention few lines about gender gap.

• sure, that sounds good to me. --EGalvez (WMF) (talk) 20:31, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

• Fourth paragaph: Refereces to backup the claim that "Pakistani coverage is not very satisfactory due to lack of editors from Pakistan". I wonder if these references would work. 1, 2.

• Perhaps instead of saying "Pakistani coverage is not very satisfactory..." you might say something like: "From my observations, there seems to be low coverage of Pakistani topics and this might be related to low number of editors from Pakistan," and then link to those two sources. --EGalvez (WMF) (talk) 20:31, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

• Edits citiation I'm not sure if this is accurate. --Saqib (talk) 19:53, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

• Yep - that works great --EGalvez (WMF) (talk) 20:31, 9 February 2015 (UTC)