Grants talk:APG/Funds Dissemination Committee/Draft Charter of the Funds Dissemination Advisory Committee

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Copyedits[edit]

I implemented the abbreviations noted in parentheses in the first section, unifying usage in the rest of the page. I also cleaned up some grammar issues. SJ talk 

Refactoring the top bullets[edit]

Current text:

  • The Committee, in conjunction with the Executive Director, shall present the Board with written recommendations regarding funds dissemination, based upon its review of the applications, submissions, deliberations, and discussions. The Committee’s actions shall be guided by the best interests of the Wikimedia mission and movement.
  • The Committee shall make such recommendations subject to the budget set forth by the Board. The recommendations shall be designed to best advance the Wikimedia mission.

Proposed replacement:

  • The Committee, in conjunction with the Executive Director, shall present the Board with written recommendations regarding funds dissemination, based upon its review of the applications, submissions, deliberations, and discussions. These recommendations shall be subject to the budget set forth by the Board.
  • The Committee’s actions shall be guided by the best interests of the Wikimedia movement, and its recommendations designed to best advance the Wikimedia mission.

SJ talk  19:58, 29 June 2012 (UTC)